Essay #1
The rough draft that I have written for the first essay in ENG 112x needs a lot of work. The revisions that I am going to focus on are appealing to the audience more, especially in the first paragraph. Also, I am going to approach the rebuttal in my paper a different way that will hopefully prove to my audience that my points are logistic and that my paper is very professional. Lastly, I need to do a quick clean up on my paper by changing punctuation and typos. The writing process that I have been using thus far consists of first starting off with a clear thesis, and then preparing a short outline. In order to benefit my finished product I am going to need to produce a more detailed outline which will allow me to double check the organization of my paper. I am also going to have to really sit, relax, and sort my thoughts out clearly so I am able to make sure that I am conveying the topic of my essay efficiently. Peer review is an amazing technique that has strengthened my papers, and improved the thought process in which I use to pick out the most important things to focus on in a paper. By allowing others around me to look over my work before the final copy is made is crucial to helping me learn about the writing process as a whole but more specifically my own writing process. As one looks over the work they are able to pick out intricate details that I myself have skipped over, simply because it is my own work. Continuing to use the peer review process after college and in the work place is also going to be a tool that will be crucial into performing to the best of your abilities. Having a different opinion than your own is important and should be used as much as possible to make sure that the subbmitted piece is up to par. This tool is a definite necessity that people should use for the long run.